kamay.me problema sa kamay.yung cleavage.parang cleavage ng babae.or maybe kasi fit yung damit niya?anyways,ano yung hawak niya?

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yun nga eh palpak yun, wala na kasi ako maisip ilahay sa kamay niya, dapat dugo yun mali din yung espada.

ang alam ko bakla si skurai eh kasi hinahabol niya si papa chaos!

wow, I can see so much improvement in your work amazing sword btw.

thanks

OMG, it's really really great, well done

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first of all,
i was shocked how much improvement that you have

ok, critization tym:
8+ mistakes in your anatomy
the knees
the hips
the feet (they look like mcdonalds)
the shoulders
the knees
the hands ( the left one is ok, but the right hands is incorrect, the have fat figners)
the chest ( its better if you make it look flat)
the neck (too long, but its not too noticable because of his clothes)

talatsu is too fat make him look more sexy (talatsu looks like a triangle)

his pose is not too striking if we are talking about brutality

try to practice more on your folds

nag imrove ka nga talaga sa inking ha
gudlak. improving!
keep up the good work

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salamat, may maibibigay ka bang tip para makagawa ng mas striking na pose? di kasi ako makaisip ng matinong pose laging simple eh minsan hindi fit sa character tulad nalang nitong si skurai

paki critic din yung inking, gusto ko pang matuto

thanks ^_^

sana man lang yung posing niya is nakalagay sa shoulder niya yung talatsu.at dapat hindi blood yung hawak niya,mas realistic kung head or skull.

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Although there are indeed problems with other aspects of this piece (the pectorals and his left hand), I love his face so...

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